Aslı Özoğuz
IB1
10.10.2012
Word Count: 405
Dear Editor,
My name is Aslı
Özoğuz and I’m a student at MEFIS schools. I read an article on your newspaper
which talked about the book called “From Boys to Men of Heart: Hunting as a
Rite of Passage”. Overall it was a great article which gave lots of useful
information. However, I believe that some of the points made weren’t actually
accurate. I am writing this letter in order to state those incorrect points. I
hope you’ll have the time to read it.
In one of the
arguments the author relates peace with hunting. He says: “What do you think Jimmy Carter and Nelson Mandela would
say? They won the Nobel Peace Prize and both are avid hunters.” to a woman who
believes that hunting is violent. However, peace and hunting can’t be linked together.
First of all, they won the peace prize
because they were being peaceful towards humans, not animals. Peace is within
the humans, not the animals. It wouldn’t be right to make a connection between
those two things. Also this doesn’t answer the question of the woman. She
believed that hunting is violent and giving reasons of why hunting is not
violent would answer the woman’s question. Giving information about how hunting
is done and how it isn’t brutal because of the equipment they use would have
made more sense.
Another
statement made which I believe is incorrect is: “My survey of older
hunters indicated that all men have spontaneously killed a small animal before
the age of ten.” The author of the book believes that this happens because
everyone has an urge to kill. I believe that this statement is invalid. There
might be some exceptions, but there is no possible way that every child had an
instinct to kill something when they were born. They might have an urge to kill
something when they grow up or when they go through some difficulties in life. Also
they probably killed it by an accident, not on purpose. However I don’t believe
that every child is born with a desire to kill. If this statement is somehow true,
I would want to see proof.
In conclusion I believe
that this article has some problems that should be solved. However, despite the
mistakes, this article is helpful and full of information about hunting. Thank
you for taking your time to read this. I hope I was helpful.
Warm Regards,
Aslı Özoğuz
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